Sunday, September 27, 2009

The Dialogue


This is how your characters converse with one another, or your characters ‘script’. Many teachers often use the principle “Show don’t tell”. There is no point in having a complex character if you are going to have them talking about their life story for nine pages. To you this may look good, but nine pages of it will bore your readers, and that is definitely not the right foot to get off on.

The great thing about Dialogue is its ability to reveal new things, or points about your Main Character as the story goes on. This gives the story the ability to perform major twists.

The character needs to keep the reader interested by doing things, not just hearing about which county he comes from at great length.

One mistake many novels make is in thinking that their readers are not intelligent, and that they do not have the ability to pick things up and learn along with the character on their journey.

Some key points about dialogue that you may need to take into consideration are as follows:

  • The Tone of voice they use while conversing with each other
  • The Words they use
  • The Sentence structure
  • The Character’s accent
  • The level of Volume they use
  • Their apparent Confidence or lack of confidence

    WORKSHOP: Write a conversation between your character and one of their relatives or another close character if no relatives are applicable. Treat it like a script, so just dialogue without and descriptive words or “He said, she said”. If you need help in writing your script, look at this blog post here
  • 3 comments:

    1. It is difficult to find different voices for characters when talking to each other. One thing you can do is write one character with your left hand and then the other with your right hand. Apparently this is meant to trigger different parts of your brain and so they will have different voices. Not sure if it works.

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    2. Your key points are all great! So many people make mistakes in making all their characters so bland because they have no depth of personality or dialogue.

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    3. That is an interesting idea Erica, I have never thought about doing that one before.

      I agree with your point Matthius, it seems to be a big problem that particularly new writers have trouble with. Hopefully they can learn some tips in order to better their writing.

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